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作者: 沂庭鋼琴夢想家 日期: 2013.04.21  天氣:  心情:
i want to earn 10 million dollars in five years.
then i will move to hualian and manage a classroom(cram school).
when my children are 18 ages, i can go abroad and study in education graduated school.
after i receive a master s degree,i will come back and become a scholar.
as a schoolar,i will innovate educational administration.
but i don t know if taiwan is still alive or not at that time.

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I like to make 10 million dollars in five years.
Afterward, I would then move to Hualian and open a cram school for exam preparation.
When my children are over the age of 18, I would like to go abroad and attend a graduate school majoring in Education.
After receiving my master’s degree, I would return and become a researcher.
As a researcher, I would engage in the innovation of school administration.
However, I am not sure that Taiwan still exists as an independent country at that time.
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時間:2013-04-22 21:13
You re welcome! Try to think eveything in a positive way whatever anything happens in your daily life. Good luck!
 
時間:2013-04-22 02:33
他, 99歲,Illinois,資訊
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作者回覆說[2013-04-22 03:05]:

ok!now you can give me private messages^^

 
時間:2013-04-21 15:02
他, 59歲,桃園市,教育研究
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時間:2013-04-21 12:32
What a nice life plan this is! Just follow and achieve it step by step. Finally, you ll make your dream come true in the future. Cheer up!
作者回覆說[2013-04-22 02:14]:

thank you~i will make my dream come true...[:D]

 
時間:2013-04-21 07:05
他, 99歲,Illinois,資訊
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作者回覆說[2013-04-22 02:12]:

you re right!my english is really poor.i want to try to improve in short time. but it s impossible...if i can go abroad maybe i can learn english more quickly.but it s impossible,too.nevertheless,i will do my best^^thank you for your suggestion!

 
時間:2013-04-21 02:17
他, 43歲,新竹市,傳播
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時間:2013-04-21 01:51
他, 39歲,桃園市,其他
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作者回覆說[2013-04-22 02:14]:

go!go!



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